This is a work of fiction, loosely based on the character "Maximus" from the Dreamworks film, "Gladiator" . No insult or invasion of copyright intended, but rather, it is a way of expressing the author's delight in Russell Crowe's work and his manliness. "Gladiator" and its characters are copyrighted by Dreamworks, but the premise of this story is copyrighted by me.

©2002 by WILDBEARIES

This story is based on characters created in the film, "Gladiator" and in no way intended to infringe upon those characters or the story of that film. References to real people are strictly the product of the writer's imagination and meant to entertain the reader.
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Maximus Decimus Meridius
"The Spaniard"


 

 

It was almost a month since Marina had confessed her feelings to Antoninus. In that time he had barely approached her, had barely spoken to her outside of rigidly formal greetings to her if he happened to be so unlucky as to run across her in the General's home or outdoors. "The man is truly denser than I thought," Ana told her at breakfast on a Wednesday morning. "I think perhaps I should speak to him."

Marina's head came up in alarm, "No! Er, I mean, I'd rather you didn't - I don't want the poor man to feel we're ganging up on him."

"Ganging up is one thing," the General interjected, glancing up from his bowl of stewed apricots in cinnamon, "knocking some sense into his thick skull is another matter entirely. I think perhaps I should be the one to enlighten him."

This was getting worse by the minute! Marina looked from one to the other of her breakfast companions, "Please - let me try one last time before you intervene. I don't want him to feel he has to do something because he's been ordered to do it - that's not what I want at all."

Maximus grinned at her, amused by her patent alarm, "Little girl, it's been my experience with 'Ninus that unless he's hit over the head with the merits of a new idea, he just doesn't even know it exists. Unless it's his idea in the first place, that is."

Slightly ruffled at his using the term "little girl", Marina realized that what the General said was true. She'd heard it from enough other people now and from her own experiences with the man to accept that as a fact of his personality that she was unlikely to change. And truly, she didn't want him to change - it was the man, with all his flaws and frailties as well as his points of excellence - whom she had fallen in love with. If he were some plaster statue of the god of virtue, she wouldn't care for him at all. "I know that," she answered Maximus now, using her most persuasive glances from under her long eyelashes on him as practice for use on Antoninus later, "but I intend to hit him with a slightly softer weapon."

No matter how patiently the General asked, she wouldn't enlighten him on her plan. Ana, who knew exactly what she planned, merely looked innocent and changed the subject. By the time Maximus broke free of his desk - piled high with account ledgers and lists of necessary items to be bought for the estate - Marina had disappeared. Nobody seemed to know where she had gone. He gave up on eliciting her plans from her, sighed in resignation and commented to his head farrier about the deviousness of women when they were plotting to drop the net of matrimony over some poor unsuspecting man. The farrier, who had just avoided such a net himself - dropped, as it was by the much older, very stringy widow of a nearby small farmer - nodded with enthusiasm.

As for Marina, she was determinedly making her way out through the olive groves shortly before noon, intent on a cooling swim in the pond. The workmen were all on the other side of the groves, indeed, on the other side of the entire estate property, today mustering the General's horses and separating the mares and their progeny so the young horses could be sorted for sale, keeping, etc. Antoninus was there, but she knew he would be asked by Lady Ana to run an errand for her before much longer. And that errand would be part of their plans for his future.

She arrived by the pond, glancing around to be sure she was alone before untying her sash and slipping out of her thin linen stola. She unlaced her sandals, walked onto the little beach of crushed gravel and waded into the water. It was warm, but in contrast to the heat of the air, it felt refreshingly cool on her skin. She dove and swam about for half an hour before emerging to sit on a big, smooth boulder. It was a favorite perch of hers, and she wrang the water out of her long hair before taking her ivory comb from the pouch attached to her sash. She began running the comb slowly through her long locks, enjoying the sensation as it parted and smoothed her hair. When her hair flowed over her shoulders like a living, dark golden cloak, she set the comb aside, tipped her face to the sun and just sat, eyes closed.

It was so quiet she could hear the hot wind rustling the olive tree branches, and even, she thought, the distant shouts of the horsemen working a long distance away. Birds twittered, a grasshopper or two clicked in the tall grass, and she smiled at the peace of it all. She loved her home and her life - except for the one thing missing from it - Antoninus. She knew with a conviction stronger than any logic that he was the man for her. Now she had only to convince him of that.

 



Antoninus, irritated that Lady Ana had suddenly called him away from his work haltering the reluctant foals, shortly found himself on what he could not but think of as the errand someone much younger and less important should be doing - going out to the pond to fetch the palla she had left there the day before. "It's been there this long," he muttered to himself, "surely it could have waited until later when I was finished with the colts - but no, nothing for it but to run right out here and fetch the blasted thing."

He stumbled on a tree root, only just managing to keep himself upright by exerting himself and grabbing a branch. "Edepol! All this needs is for me to break an ankle," he snarled. Just for spite, he snapped off a small branch-end from the tree whose root had exhibited the bad manners to trip him.

He was almost at the pond. As he neared it, sweating under his simple linen tunic, he thought perhaps he would indulge in a swim before heading back with the object of his trip. It wouldn't hurt to be a bit late, he reasoned. The lady had probably already forgotten sending him on his fool's errand in the first place. He walked out of the olive trees and onto the soft grass surrounding the pond. Ah - the water did look cool and inviting. And nobody was about.

He saw Lady Ana's stola folded on the rock, right where she told him she'd left it, and just rolled his eyes at the forgetful nature of women, even women he admired greatly. None of them were immune from lapses of memory, it seemed. He unbuckled his well-worn leather belt and put it on the big boulder near the shore. He shrugged out of his tunic and inguinal sash and placed them on top of the belt, stretching luxuriously at being bare naked and totally free out under the brilliant blue skies of late summer. Smiling to himself, loving his life, he climbed onto the fallen tree he and the General favored, and dove cleanly into the pond.

The water was cooler than the air temperature and closed over his outstretched toes, refreshing and comfortable. He swam underwater for a short distance to emerge, shaking water from his hair and shouting in pleasure. By the gods, he thought, this is Elysium on Earth. He turned onto his back and floated, relaxed, eyes slitted as he gazed up at the heavens. He needed nothing more in his life - he was content.

A small splash nearby brought him out of his self-satisfied musings and he glanced up in surprise, made the moreso when he realized who else was in the lake. "Lady Marina!" he exclaimed in outraged modesty. He slid under the water so quickly he swallowed what seemed like half the pond before emerging again to cough and splutter at the amused girl. "You should not be in here!" he finally managed to choke out.

One dark blonde brow rose in inquiry, "Why ever not? I swim here all the time, I've as much right to be here as you, sir." And she actually swam closer to him, causing him to back water in alarm.

"Stay away!" he warned her, retreating, then realizing the futility of that. If he backed too far away, he'd be right out of the lake altogether, standing stark naked on the shore. He stopped moving and just floated there, only his head and shoulders out of the water. "Stop doing that and listen to reason - you cannot be in here when I'm in here!"

Marina smiled, enjoying how the tide of his blush came and went with the tenor of his thoughts. "I most certainly can be in here - it's you who must get out."

"How do you figure that?" he wanted to know.

"I was here first," she pointed out logically, and gestured to where her garments hung from a branch on a nearby apple tree. "See? I put them there - in plain sight - I'm surprised you didn't see them when you came blundering up here through the olive grove."

"I did not blunder!" he retorted, realizing she'd seen him stumble over the tree root - and take it out on the tree branch. Would he never stop falling on his arse around her, he wondered. "And how could I be expected to search out every bit of cloth hanging on every tree limb - I was hunting for Lady Ana's stola."

"I don't think it would suit you," Marina teased him. She loved how he blinked and looked puzzled for a moment before realizing she meant it wouldn't look good on him. The man was too darling!

"I wasn't going to wear it," he barked, "gods, you are an exasperating woman!"

She laughed, tipping onto her back to float languidly around, limbs barely moving, the water caressing her body softly. She heard his indrawn breath as he no doubt ogled her nude form, then heard him thrashing in the water as he rushed to turn his back. He was so predictable, just as was the Lady Ana. In fact, it should be just about time. . .

"Oh, Edepol!" Antoninus suddenly hissed, head tilted to one side as his ears caught the sound of someone approaching. "Get out of the water - someone's coming!"

Maddeningly, she chose not to move. Instead she turned onto her stomach, swam closer and stopped, dog paddling in place, just her head, shoulders and arms above the water. He could see her round breasts just under the crystalline surface, though, their soft pink tips elongated by the coolness of the water. "I think it's too late to get out now," she informed him. And, to his total chagrin, she turned so she was right beside him, facing the shore of the pond as both Lady Ana and General Maximus emerged from the olive trees. "Hellooooo!" she called to them, waving gaily.

"Hell and damnation," Antoninus snarled, and, totally out of his normal character, which would never have seen a well-bred lady - or almost any lady, for that matter - come to any harm, he tried to shove her behind him for modesty's sake and only managed to shove her under the water. "Gods - Lady Marina!" he stuttered, and tried to pull her head up so she wouldn't drown. He succeeded in pulling her hair so that when she emerged, she struck at him with both wildly flailing arms and managed to swat him a hard blow that would probably blacken his right eye. "Edepol!"

Ana nudged Maximus, who had suddenly caught on to the entire plan and who was almost purple-faced with stifled laughter, "I think you'd best rescue Marina before he drowns her - or she kills him."

Maximus strode forward into the water, stopping only to undo his sandals first, and grabbed Marina by one arm, "Come with me, and don't hit him again - he can't hit you back."

Marina, whose scalp still tingled from having her hair pulled so hard, stopped trying to yank Antoninus' thick dark hair out of his scalp in revenge and moved docilely ashore with her guardian. Ana wrapped her in her stola, having retrieved it from the apple tree branch, and set about comforting her while Maximus merely stood, grinning widely at his earstwhile lieutenant, who was beginning to feel totally foolish.

"Best get out of the water and face the music," Maximus advised him.

"But - I - she - we - the minx wouldn't get out of the water!" 'Ninus finally managed. Realizing that sounded a bit ungallant, he hastened to explain further, "I told her she had to get out - before somebody saw us, that is - and she wouldn't go."

Maximus nodded, "Perfectly logical to me - you wanted her to get out of the water, stark naked, and - do what? Array herself on the boulder for you to ravish? Were you playing at being Poseidon, come to pillage the beauteous local maidens?"

Antoninus, who had gone from purple to red to white in the face in the space of that one question, shook his head fiercely, "No - no- nothing like that - I just wanted her to get out of the water."

"So you could see her completely naked?" Ana asked him, glancing up from getting Marina's stola bound by her sash. Marina fought the urge to giggle, hiding her face as if mortified, looking down at the grass and biting her lip.

Antoninus looked at Lady Ana, even more mortified, "No - nothing like that - I told you - she wouldn't get out of the pond - and I told her she had to do it - get out, I mean - and she wouldn't go, and then you came - and I meant to shove her behind me - and naturally nothing she does is ever normal, so she went under the water instead - and then she smacked me in the eye."

Ana and Maximus merely gazed at him while Antoninus panted and wondered how everything had gone so wrong. One minute he'd been happily floating, contemplating Nature and how his life was so perfect and now, no more than a quarter of an hour later, he was chest-deep in water and feeling as if it were quicksand under his feet and not the sandy bottom of the pond. Marina looked up then and he caught the expression on her face before she could school her features. He realized he'd just been neatly trapped. "Like a trout," he told himself. And he'd fallen right into it. Hooked, and hooked well, dragged up onto the shore, and now waiting for the conk on the head to put him out of his misery.

Well, hell.
 


 

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